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Natalie's Term 4 Writing Group

 

Short stories!

 

Click the links below and read the two short stories.

 

Think about these things while you are reading:

 

  • how does the author create a concise story line?

  • can you identify all the elements of a good story eg; orientation that sets the scene, problem/s, the action or events after the problem and the resolution or solution?

  • who is the intended audience?

 

Mere Suggestion

Natalie's Term 3 Writing Group

...read and take notes on the key features of these texts...

 

1. How earthquakes happen

2. Why do we need more native plants in our cities?

3. How to attract birds to your garden

4. Why does Australia have different environments and climates

5. Deserts

6. How ants find their way

 

...which we did and we produced this...

 

 

...to help us with writing explanation texts! thanks Aqila!!!

 

Below are the common themes that kept popping up in all the texts we read and on your sticky notes when I read them...

Structure

Language and Vocabulary

Tense and Word Level Grammar

The title can be a question; Why do we need more native plants in our cities?

 

Paragraphs that have different facts in an order

 

Step by step sequence

 

Can have sub headings but not always

 

Conclusion is a summary or personal comment

 

Pictures that add to the text

 

Maps with a key to help you understand

 

Labelled diagrams

 

Simple layout on website, writing or flow chart

 

Could be video form explaining the cause and effect

Technical words

 

Subject specific vocabulary used

 

Describes how things happen

 

No speech

 

Factual language

 

Descriptions creating text easy to understand

 

Details on a subject

 

Statements describe something with a cause and effect structure; The tectonic plates collide therefore at the earth’s surface there are earth quakes

 

General and specific language

 

There can be questions

Present tense generally used

 

Simple and complex sentences

 

Phrases that signal a sequence of events;

at the same time, after a while, not long before

 

Action verbs are used

 

Verbs are in the present tense; explodes, builds, pushes, is folded, being tossed

 

Conjunctions; whereas, since, whether, however, since, yet, because

Information for planning your explanation text

 

Ebola

 

Malaria

 

Use your planning document to help you identify the information you're going to need for your 3 paragraphs

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